1.my paragraph is almost the same as it was but my third CD and CM were completely different than before. My new concrete detail was about the humor aspect of Algernon wanting to change his name to earnest.
2.How do you think I could make my third CM better as I have yet to finish it.
I guess since I don't really know what the quote is, just make sure you relate it to the thesis in a different idea than your other concrete details. There are some changes I made to the conclusion and we need to reword things in the intro tomorrow also.
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